Check the grammar on the MS Office Update site!

[Nicholas]

The starting line on the MS Office Update web page says: "Checking for
updates you need".
At least, change it to something like "Checking for any updates that you may
need", or "Checking for updates that you may need for your software", etc.

It's ironic that an Office productivity product, that has a comprehensive
spell checker and thesaurus, has this obvious bad grammatical tone of words
in the opening statement of the product update screen.

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[Bob Buckland ?:-\)]

Hi Nicholas,

When you check that sentence in Word what grammar error
does it report?


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The starting line on the MS Office Update web page says: "Checking for
updates you need".
At least, change it to something like "Checking for any updates that you may
need", or "Checking for updates that you may need for your software", etc.

It's ironic that an Office productivity product, that has a comprehensive
spell checker and thesaurus, has this obvious bad grammatical tone of words
in the opening statement of the product update screen. >>