Critique Site ......

[Arthur Pratz]

Hi all,
I have been working on this site for a while now.
I am posting on this newsgroup for honest reviews please.
I will be working on the store link with accepting credit cards online. So
any tips for making an online checkout would be helpful. I will be using
Miva Merchant to do that.
Thanks for your time,
Mike Pratz
http://www.chowardcompany.com

 

[RedFaction]

The site looks very nice. Only thing is on the Products page...it gets a
little redundant for you to show the package quantities for each flavor and
underneath each you put 'This is a...'. Find a way to standardize this
information for all product lines. If you insist on having all the graphics,
try using picture text/ alt tags to indicate what flavor/quantity they
represent. I just think that this is the sort of thing visitors will pick
up on and they don't necessarily need it broken down item by item.

The site has much potential and you should be proud of it.

 

[Arthur Pratz]

The site looks very nice. Only thing is on the Products page...it gets a
little redundant for you to show the package quantities for each flavor and
underneath each you put 'This is a...'. Find a way to standardize this
information for all product lines. If you insist on having all the graphics,
try using picture text/ alt tags to indicate what flavor/quantity they
represent. I just think that this is the sort of thing visitors will pick
up on and they don't necessarily need it broken down item by item.

The site has much potential and you should be proud of it.
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www.ddh1969.com



Thanks

Mike