How does this PowerPoint Presentation Look So Far?

[mojo0716]

I'm taking a required class that deals with Windows and Microsoft
Office. We have to create a PowerPoint presentation on any topic we
wish for our final project. I picked Global Warming as my topic. I'm
about halfway done with it and I would like to get comments on it,
before I finish it.

You can check it out here:

http://www.websitevisions.com/globalwarming/Global Warming.ppt

thanks

 

[toms]

As an HVACR teacher and contractor it's not bad

Has some spelling errors & run on words - edit the text again

tom

 

[Ute Simon]

I'm about halfway done with it and I would like to get comments on it,

before I finish it.

I like your visuals and the animation. But the slides change too quick, I
did not have time to read all the text - and I think this is not only
because English is not my native language. You should take into account,
that people need more time to read a text on the screen then on paper.

Some minor things:
- increase the distance between bullet points and the first character in
lists
- try to use diagrams with better quality or don't enlarge them so much,
they look very pixilated

Best regards,
Ute

 

[mojo0716]

I like your visuals and the animation. But the slides change too quick, I
did not have time to read all the text - and I think this is not only
because English is not my native language. You should take into account,
that people need more time to read a text on the screen then on paper.

Some minor things:
- increase the distance between bullet points and the first character in
lists
- try to use diagrams with better quality or don't enlarge them so much,
they look very pixilated

Best regards,
Ute

Thanks for the comments. I wish I had more time to put a better
PowerPoint Presentation together. It's due early tomorrow though and
our teacher didn't give us much time really. I will probably be up all
night working on it. I especially wish I had more time to work on
refining and creating new animations.

thanks