I don't think music will help you, not even one tiny bit...unless you were
selling music.
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Rob Giordano
Microsoft MVP Expression
|I appreciate your comment Sir but we're more into the lending aspect of the
| business rather than attract investors.
|
| | > Kinda like going to Wells Fargo Bank and listening to the theme from
| > Bonanza
| > or something....yah I'd put my money in there eh?
| >
| > --
| > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
| > Rob Giordano
| > Microsoft MVP Expression
| >
| >
| >
| >
| >
| > | > | Oh my! I had my sound turned off. I agree...
| > |
| > | DavidF
| > |
| > message
| > | | > | > You forgot to mention; kill the bgsound ! Especially for a business
| > site!
| > | >
| > | >
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| > | > Rob Giordano
| > | > Microsoft MVP Expression
| > | >
| > | >
| > | >
| > | >
| > | >
| > | > | > | > | One of my personal goals here in this newsgroup is to offer
| > | > "constructive"
| > | > | feedback and help. It takes a lot of courage to provide a link to
a
| > new
| > | > | website and ask for feedback, and I admire and respect that. With
| > that
| > | > goal
| > | > | in mind, I gotta say your site is pretty bad...but can be fixed.
| > | > |
| > | > | You need to remove the background image behind the text:
| > | > |
http://www.plicorp.name/index_files/image4401.jpg
| > | > | It makes it impossible to read the text, and after all it is the
| > text
| > | > that
| > | > | is the most important part of your site. Content is king, as they
| > say.
| > | > |
| > | > | I have not seen anyone use semi-transparent text boxes before in a
| > Pub
| > | > web.
| > | > | I kind of like the effect, but it is a print format that does not
| > | > translate
| > | > | to html well. It seems to work ok in IE but in FireFox all the
text
| > is
| > | > | converted to images. A couple examples:
| > | > |
http://www.plicorp.name/index_files/image642.png
| > | > |
http://www.plicorp.name/index_files/image461.png
| > | > | While you might live with this, it does mean that any hyperlinks
in
| > | > those
| > | > | text boxes will not work in FF. Personally, I believe that you
need
| > to
| > | > | design so your pages will work well in both IE and FF, especially
| > since
| > | > it
| > | > | is a business site. If you don't have FF on your computer, I
| > recommend
| > | > that
| > | > | you download and install it, so you can test your pages. It is a
| > small
| > | > | download and easy install, and you can test your html before you
| > upload
| > | > it.
| > | > |
| > | > | Bottom line is that as "nice" as the semitransparency looks, you
| > | > probably
| > | > | shouldn't use it, at least in the body of the page...maybe OK in
the
| > | > banner.
| > | > | The text in the body of your page does not show up in the code
even
| > in
| > | > | IE...the search engines and webots will not be able to index you
| > site.
| > | > | Content is king...
| > | > |
| > | > | Personally I would also get rid of the time and counter. I am
| > sitting
| > at
| > | > my
| > | > | computer...I know what time it is. The counter will not give you
any
| > | > good
| > | > | information. Look to your host for webstats instead. Using a
counter
| > on
| > | > a
| > | > | page doesn't necessarily project the image I would assume you
want.
| > | > |
| > | > | Look, I am not an expert web designer, and my opinions are just
| > that.
| > | > | However, I think that many newbies and even some old pros fall
into
| > the
| > | > trap
| > | > | of adding "stuff" to their pages, and special effects just because
| > they
| > | > can.
| > | > | And just because you can, doesn't mean you should. As you are
using
| > | > | Publisher, your pages should be simple anyway, so try to KISS, is
my
| > | > best
| > | > | recommendation. The content is what is most important...not the
| > bells
| > | > and
| > | > | whistles. Make your pages easy to read, easy to navigate, quick to
| > load
| > | > and
| > | > | full of good content, and you will have a "good" site in my
opinion.
| > | > |
| > | > | Here are two links that might help in planning the design of your
| > site:
| > | > |
http://webdesignfromscratch.com/
| > | > | and no offense but:
| > | > |
http://www.webpagesthatsuck.com/
| > | > |
| > | > | I hope this is constructive. The good news is that you did stop
and
| > ask
| > | > for
| > | > | opinions before you built the whole site. Take a step back and
| > | > reevaluate
| > | > | what your goals are for your site, and what is the content. Then
| > design
| > | > | around those things. Good luck.
| > | > |
| > | > | DavidF
| > | > |
| > | > | | > | > | >I have just posted 3 pages out of 15. I would like to hear your
| > inputs
| > | > | >before I finish my work. Check out
www.plicorp.name Thanks!
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