I am rather old 59 and I do Fart a lot (especial if I eat Cabbage,
turnip greens, Brocalli, Pinto beans with onions).
But I did Rewrite our bylaw's and Working rules allowing Word to suggest
active tense word in place of the passive voice ones. when submitted,
all that proof read the changes said it Completely changed the meaning
of the passages corrected.
One person that did the proofing was a former Woman TV shop owner
operator out of New York (now lives in Raleigh, NC) who last name is
Cicchetti. (sounds similar to spaghetti) at one time she was a President
of a National Electronics Association. (So she knew a thing or two about
Bylaws and working Rules.
John said:
Hi Phillip:
You only say that because you are an old fart, Phillip
Modern "plain English" which is what rules and bylaws should be written in,
works better in active tense. Much easier for readers whose native language
may not be English.
Passive tense can get very convoluted: difficult for people who are not
native English speakers.
Cheers
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